Interesting interpretation, Jorge. I like all the "we"s in the middle. Is "take spoon" about using drugs? I am associating the image a little bit with heroin, etc. Is that right? If so, you've made the darkness a little darker.
Jess, "Take spoon" means something like that. I tried to write that part in a way that makes connection with all the "we", becausethe "we's" part let the meaning a little more selfish, wich let us know more about "theyr's" personality.
Interesting interpretation, Jorge. I like all the "we"s in the middle. Is "take spoon" about using drugs? I am associating the image a little bit with heroin, etc. Is that right? If so, you've made the darkness a little darker.
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Jess, "Take spoon" means something like that. I tried to write that part in a way that makes connection with all the "we", becausethe "we's" part let the meaning a little more selfish, wich let us know more about "theyr's" personality.
ReplyDeleteI like the last two sentences "We take spoon. We die soon." I have special feelings about them,it can read fluently.It is so cool!Good job!
ReplyDeleteWOO!! Special poem. Put all the "we" together is a great idea.
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